作者词汇量偏少,也有些单词拼写错误;熟练的采用了一些从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
When sad life, your friend whether encourage you to go out sad life. Lt' likely that encouraged with us are very good in the future,because us haven't it.As is often the case us often to meet sad thing with the friend and we must be encourage to with the friend said sorry for you.We were encouraged goes to do many thing,such as, the first play basketball or the first go to swimming in the pool.L believe the title statement is valid,because encouraging is very good in the life.