2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

With the development of science and technology,computer is becoming more and more popular among people。 It brings us a lot of convenience，there are three reasons。First,we can surf the internet to search for what we need.Second,we can send letters or receive letters,it is easy and convenient,it also saves our time。 Last but not least,we can enrich our eyes through the internet。 However，every coin has its two sides ,if we do not make full use of the internet,we will suffer form the internet。The reasons are as follows,for one thing ,there are some people are overuse the internet ,they take too much time on the internet ,so they live an abnormal life ,for the other thing ,people on the internet are always cheating with each other In my personal sense ,we should make full use of the internet ,because it has a large amount of resource for us。