- 分享到:
内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；作者词汇量偏小，本文拼写错误较多语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Dear, I'm Hubin,I kown your company's new product which numble is 5670 is in during exhibition on newyoke and which time is reach 15 to 22,12.For this,I'm very glad to your new product.I hope you can give me a price list and instructio in case I can think and discuss with my teem.if you can return soon,I'll be apprepriate to you.I'm really hope we can establish bussiness relationship.I'm looking forward to you letter soon. Best wishes yours, Hubin.
