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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear, I'm Hubin,I kown your firm's new product which number is 5670 is in during exhibition on new-yoke and which time is reach 15 to 22,12.For this,I'm very glad to your new product.I hope you can give me a price list and instruction in case I can think and discuss with my teem.if you can return soon,I'll be appropriate to you.I'm really expect we can establish business relationship.I'm looking forward you letter soon. Best wishes yours, Hubin.
