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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As a college student,whether we should be careful about our money is discussed .Opinion vary from person to person.for me ,l strongly approve of this opinion . There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.First and foremost ,we should be careful about our money to decrease our parents' life pressure .we can not make money to support ourselves now,everything provided with us is by our parents ,with the time goes by,they are older and older,so it is the time for us to careful more about them and more careful about the money in our hand .Second ,we are student now ,the most important thing is study not enjoy .thus ,we need not to pay more attention to those things that how much we buy them ,just buy something that we really need.Last but not least,caring more about our money can develop a good habit for our life,so that we will not waste in our daily life. All in all,i maintain that it is necessary for us to be careful to our money,not only for ourselves but also for our family.
