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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, tourism become a business in China. People have different opinions about tourism. Some of them think many tourists may bring harm to the environment, some of them don't think so. In my opinion, tourism will bring harm to the environment. As we all know, tourism will bring many profits to us, however, too many tourists will also bring harm to the environment. Especially some uncivil tourist, they would threw dustbin away anywhere. Some dustbin can be cleaned but some are hard to clean and do harm to the environment. For example, putting oil into the river, which is hard to clean the river so that lead to water pollution. In addition, some tourist will destroy public facilities. Such as draw some words on the tree, wall ,ground and so on. It is also bring harm to the environment. As a citizen, we have the duty to protect the environment; as a tourist, we should follow the tourists' rules and be a civil tourist.
