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Attending college is a dream for most teenagers for they could obtain there not only academic knowledge but also social skills .Also they could make close friends at this period of time. Therefore a majority of people believe that the college years are the best time in a person's life, I can' agree with it more. Colleges are regarded as the cradle of elites since they were established hundreds of years ago. As universally acknowledged, a number of talented instructors and qualified professors gather in universities which offers a valuable chance for students to pursue knowledge with the help of these scholars face to face whereas workers outside school seldom have a similar opportunity, so it's the best time to arm students with knowledge. Enough knowledge could help them find a decent job. Moreover, as college students couldn't enjoy the help from parents far away, they are obliged to do housework by themselves so that they can learn to live independently. In addition, college is the best time for students to develop friendship or even affinity. Close friends could be made in colleges for they have the same age, the same interests and the same dream. They live in the same dorm and they could chase dream together. Also, they could find boy friends or girl friends that they may get married. Friendship and love fill the colorful college life. All in all, all people spend their most valuable time in colleges, learning knowledge to pave a way towards success in future. Although there's no help from parents, students could feel other motions such as friendship and love from schoolmates. Currently, I'm getting prepared for college study and I hope the best time in life will bring more exciting memory to me!
