2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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As the old saying there is no home and a suitable place.Allow me to show around place and place and which is suitable and inviting some people who is inviting you to do.What it is suitable place and around place and some places and inviting and some places who is something it is suitable