2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shopping Nowadays, Many people are crazy about online shopping. Some of people in favor of online shopping . They think it is very convenient. Besides online shopping can save time and the thing is considerable cheap on the net. So many office worker like going shopping on the net. Gradually, online shopping becomes a fanshion. however, the others think it is wrong online shopping. First, online shopping is very dangerous,.Because the net has a lot false news. then we can not see the real goods,judge whether the goods is fine. As for as I am concerned, I prefer going shoppping in the supermarket. Because it will make me feel relaxing.