学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Time belongs to a technology time.There is common phenomenon in everywhere we can see is that people pay all of their attention to their high-tech produce.There's not doubt that technology brings many advantages to us,but every coin has two sides,it also affects our interpersonal communication. The impaction which is caused by internet is various. Something to be affirmed.Internet changes the way of communicating.In a sense,It makes our interpersonal communication more convenient,it's possible that people needn't communicate with others face to face through the internet.Nevertheless,helpful as it seem to be, Many parents complaint that their children focus on their computer instead to talk with them.Actually,their kids have few free-time to communicate with them than pervious,which is the time that kids don't involved in internet. As I see it,It's necessary to make sure enough time to communicate with each other though internet is a magic place.We shouldn't to get less but to lose more.
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