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how to find a perfect balance With the development of economic,the consuming ability of the morden students is becoming stronger and stronger.however,the daily cost of these students who even have no salary to raise themselves is becoming unaffordable ,too.so in my opinion ,managing money in a proper way perhaps is the most important thing we should consider about.after all,we do not want to burden in debt ,right? there are my own views to support my stand point.on the one hand,students are still under the wings of their parents.they even are lack of the basic ability to earn their own money to support their daily cost.so why not save their money in an acceptable way ,which will free them from the fanacial pressure.on the other hand,the students can gain a lot of experience from learning how to manage money and how to be the master of money,which will in great help of the future development for these students. all in all,standing in the angle of the students,i think we should save money for ourselves.besides ,we are just students.our major task is still studying instead of living a posh life.we can learn to be a clever consumers after we find a job.we can try to contribute to the economical development for our motherland after we are strong enough.perhaps untill that day,we can say we finally can handle our own money proudly. i think this is the key of how to make a perfect balance!
