建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
There is an old saying that taking action before thinking twice.That means you cannot always rely on what you see and what you hear.The reasons to do so have twofold.First, Things are not usually what they appear to be.You must inquire into the eccent of the problem before you can deal with it.Second,It is unwise to jump into a conclusion as soon as you see or hearing something . You may move toward a wrong way before you have a full konwledge of the problem.Third,it is easy to draw a conclusion but you are not assure that it is the best one .You can evalute the alterntive way to solve the problem and find out the best way to conquer it .To sum up,we will spare our time to move toward the right route when you made a study of the problem at first.
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