2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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man and computer in 1946 the first computer in the world come in to the world ,at that time the computer was used in malitary ,and not so popular as now ,it's verg large and complicated ,however ,with the developing of the techology and economic ,we can use little money to buy a computer ,and with a lot of functions ,with the computer ,we same live in a villiage in the earth ,and keep in torch with each other on line easily it's very convenient and save time .we can our search what we need in computer ,computer make our life more efficient