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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1795[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文章词汇表达丰富,若多用学术词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Learners nowadays always find their own ways to study.In a group or all by oneself.But as I see it,I would rather study alone than in a group.There are a lot of reasons of studying alone. First of all,I am the kind of people who like quiet places.Because only in this way can I concentrate on what I am learning,Take one example of mine,there was a time I study with the rest of my roommates,at that time,I had the idea that I must enjoy this process,for we could help each other if we have any problem.But on the contrary,it was hard for us to focus.This study in a group thing,which made us always whisper into others' ears,then after hours,we barely finish nothing.So this is the time that I realize study singly would be a better choice. On the other hand,study in a group cannot give us the chance to think carefully,as soon as we come across a question,we ask for someone else instead of thinking it with our own knowledge.Looking back the picture where I studied in a classroom.There was a hard math problem that I could not figure out.Without hesitation,I turned to my deskmate,wondered if she could assist me with it.She looked at it ,but it was not take a long time before she work it out.She solved this problem for me,then I understood that this exercise wasn't that difficult.It was just that I did not try it as much as I can.With someone to study by,I will have the sense of indenpendence,which consequented my being idle.Since then studying along will always be my first choice. In a word,as what I explained above,we are suppoed to study alone and treasure this kind of chances.Had not I awared of this,I would not have had today's advantages.

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