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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Living in an age when the appearance,no matter the person or the company,is more important than anything else.We ourselves,especially the youngers,always judge the individual by his or her appearance. There is something to do with judging a person by his or her outline.The aspects are as following:firstly,a good appearance frequently make others have a good feeling and more than often is impressed someone who are interested inhim or her.Secondly,a naty person,weather he or she wears new or old cloth,also has a precise and logical thinking,which offers him or her an opportunity to do a good job.Last but not the least,the appearance of a person usually has something to do with his or her confidence. To sum up,the person's appearance is very important to a individual's career.However,the appearance isn't the all factor that can impressed to the people.We can realize a person by any other aspects,such as the ability to communication,handling things,writing,which are much more important than the appearance,and so on.So it is unwise to judge a person by his or her appearance.

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