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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29):烦恼和我说

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要求：

假如你是某英语报社“烦恼和我说”栏目的编辑Linda，收到中学生David 的来信。请你阅读这封信后，给他回信。词数：120左右。

Dear Ms Linda,
Though living in a wealthy family, I don’t feel as happy as other boys because I’m forbidden to do what I want to ,such as surfing the Internet, playing with my friends, buying what I want , and so on. My parents ask me to study all day. I feel they are too hard on me . I often feel upset as I have no freedom. What shall I do ? I will greatly appreciate it if you could give me some advice.

Yours, David

回信应包括以下两个要点：
1。简述自己的类似的经历；
2．提出至少两条建议。

注意：
开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

用户的作文（系统评分52.5分）

评语：

文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文：

I'm glad to receive your letter and I willing to help you. I have some experiences in this way. Bcause ever I have surffered like you,I don`t have free and I must be allow my parents advice.Im study hard and not allow to go outside,I ofen fell lonely . Like a voice around my ear , tell me,you should study,study.Finally,I realized that if I study good and I will be free.Then,I try my best to study and I'm succeed . I have some advice; first,you should go hard in your study .Only do good and you maybe get chance to do youself. Second,you should talk with you parents ,let them know your thinking . Wish you sucess. Lnda

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