小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have many good friendes, Lilei is the best one. LiLei is a England girl. she is 23 yeares old. she graduated in beijing university.she like classical miusical and dance.she fastival colour is blue, and she like to eat chinese food.we are often going to swimming.she is very beautiful. she's famaily have four people,she has a younger brother,her is 20 year old.