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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3103
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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There are an upsurge about certificate.As known to us all,It's no doubt that certificate is important.So we can see many people are busy in getting a kinds of certificates there and here. Why do people so crazy about getting the certificate?There are some reasons.The obvious one is that it is helpful for us to acquire a job.In the 21 century,Certificate play an important role in competing for getting a job.However,some people try their best to get certificate just for making them feel more satisfied,they always lack confidence unfortunately.Differents form what is said above, the reason why a few people are crazy about certificate is that they want to be better.So they study hard and never to stop,One by-product of it is that they get possess more and more certificates. In my opinion,we should not study just for certificate but for study.There are too many false certificates,so you have no choice but to study.

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