小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I have many good friends, Li Lei is the best one. Li Lei is a English girl. She is 23 years old. She graduated in BeiJing university. She likes classical musical and dance.She festival colour is blue, and she likes to eat chinese food.We are often going to swimming.She is very beautiful. She has a younger brother,her is 20 years old.