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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

There is a debate about whether everything depends on the appearance?'Face decide everything' is a popular thinking with young people recently.However,It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. There are too many reasons for it.Fristly,the face is nature,but the skill can be learned by hard working.A more beautiful face can not prove anything,for example,it's even not a advantage to apply for a job.Secondly,no one can choose face what belongs to them,of course,expect face-lifting. In different states,we can see various looks.Whatever states we belong to,we always see different looks,form beautiful to ugly.It's a powerful proof to prove that ability have nothing to do with the face.Lastly,China has a famous say is that face comes from the heart,so many people think that the one who have a beautiful appearance have a good character,I think there is a thing deserve to be mentioned,the face refer to expression not looks. In short,We judge a person should by understanding people comprehensively,not only faces.

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