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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71669
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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A beautiful city in China My hometown is GuanZhou ,in my opinion ,GuanZhou is a very beautify city in China. GuanZhou is a city where you can appreciate both the ancient culture and modern city lifestyle .There is endemic traditional house and modern glass-wrapped building .GuanZhou is known as her delicious food ,in which you can enjoy any food from anywhere .As for me ,I prefer the local food and I strongly suggest you to experience the "Morning Tea "culture in GuanZhou .What's more ,the cured meat and soup is also worth trying . In a word ,GuanZhou is a city where combine with traditional and modern lifestyle ,and you will absolutly have a good time in here .

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