2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend, do you remember me, I'm Chen .our have a good time at Guangzhou in last year. I'm learning english and writer the email for that invite you come my hometown.i think you'll interesting to lanterns of my hometown. The lantern constant make you amazing If you come to my hometown .