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the most meaning life people all dream of their life being colorful.everyone is looking forward tomeaning life.but how to come true?this is a difficuilt problem.Different people have different ideals about it. personally speaking,i expect to relax and happy life . such as going trip around the world,doing every goal wanting to,staying more time with my families and so on.as a student, i am going to finish my school career,thus i expect to find a good jod after grraduation,which is one of my life aims at present.
