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People nowadays are often obsessed about judging someone or something just for what they look like instead of what is inside of them,which is known to us--not wise. There was a time when I was a high school student,my head teacher wanted one of us to be our monitor.Of course everyone wanted it.Out of our astonishment,there was a boy who seemed so short and looked like a total fool also had the desire to do the job.As you can imagine,we all looked down upon him.But out of some other reasons,he made it,which had no doubt brought him a great amount of jealous and mocks.Nevertheless,as time flew little by little,I got to admit that he did a wonderful job.Only then was I aware of the fact that we have no right to deny someone or something the moment we see them just for what we see with eyes and what we hear with ears. Since then,I learned that I ought to know someone or something gradually,then give my comments on it,which is the very wise thing to do.
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