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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章词汇使用比较恰当，学术词汇积累不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
in this technology world, people can use many electronic tools to have a communication instead of face to face contact. for example, facebook, qq and we chat. ect. but i think these electronic tools can't instead of face to face contact. you know, sometimes when we in trouble or we are down, we need someone to comfort or face it together. but if we just use phone to say some comfortable words but no action. i think with the time going,our friendship will change. sometimes, something can be explain clearly if we are face to face. maybe our friendship will be better than before just because of misunderstand gone. everyone have a family and there are our dear parents. they raised us and worry about us, even though we are all adults. many times they called us and ask weather everything is going on or not. we often say:"yes, iam fine.everything is going on well,don't worry. iam working and call you bake soon.” and then hang up. i guess they may be very sad. they just want to see their children,have a dinner together and have a chat each other. but we often use the electronic tools to refuse them. so if possible, put down your phone or something, have a pleasant chat with your friend or parents. some amazing things will be happen.
