题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Obviously, computers are more and more become a part of our life, which we can't life without them.But we shoudn't too depent on to do anything. Computer give us many messages.We can know everything all over the world everyday though the computers that we know the news on time. We use it to contact our relations or friends no matter how far we are. Of couse, we will make more friends, and more new activities. Our life get interesting that we share our daily funny things and potoes. However, we cann't life only computer, we need talk to the people we love face to face, writting ,playiny. Man should make good use the computers. The computer are made by man , which are human nature, we can do much things .