文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
as it is known to all, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. but in our daily life , several people can make it. for example, if you like eating one thing you like best and at the same time you like the others,now, you have get in trouble.The problem is that you can just only choose the one thing, you can not get both of them. So it is high time that we should make a decision.