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I have a good friend called Jack.He has brown hair and a pair of big eyes.His nose is very high.He like talking and helping classmates.I like play with him.Sometime he invite me to play videogame together.He also like playing football.He often organize football game after class.He is very popular in our school.Almost everyone like playing with him.