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I have many friends. The Girl named Bian Qingqing is my good friend . She is a beautiful and clever girl who comes from Jilin province. She worked for the same school named Guangdong Institute of Science and Technology with me. We always play with each other.SomeTimes we talk about each of the students.SomeTimes we talk about life for example boys ,shopping etc. I'm so happy with the good friend.