2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(71):带手机上学

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Dear principle, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have recently had about whether mobiles should be brought to school. We have different opinions on this matter. Most of us(about 70% )think that mobile phones should not be brought to school. Mobile phones will distract students' attention on study when we pick up a phone or see a text. Some smart phones are very expensive, they will add to the economic burden of our parents. The rest of the students( about 30%) think mobiles could be brought to school so long as they are turned off in class. It is a necessary commuication tool for us to get in touch with our parents. Also, it is a new era, we should not be kept within a certin old discipline. Yours truly, Li Hua