文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;多多注意文中错误的句子;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分;连词使用偏少。
My new teacher is form Italy. She is very kindness. She has two big eye,and long hair. She usually told me should hard study. She likes swimming and playing basketball. She got married when she 26 yeas old.She had a boy baby,the baby was born last year. She's husband is a Manager. In the all,she is a good teacher,I am very love her .