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Hi Billy, I am now on vacation with my family members in Yangsu which is a famous attraction in China. As soon as I arrived here, I was carried away by its natural scenery. Its rich traditional culture also left me a profound impression. Visitors from home and abroad can be found everythere in Yangshu. The shopowners are very friendly and a lot of them can communicate with foreign friends in English. You really should come here to have a holiday. I will stay here few days more to enjoy more of the beautiful scenery and I will send some postcards to my friends before I leave. You surely will get one. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
