2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦41:我的习惯

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i like writing and reading books in my leisyte time .i am found od sports and expecially llike bad mountain.my hobby ofclimbing monainings and keeps me fit and close to the nature .i don,t like films .io buld up a good habbit of needs playing footabll and basketvballs at weekends .on weekends ,i always watch football matches on tv .i don,t mind how ,much house i spent on it .i like reading my journals every day .i was too busy to write daries because my rhythm of life is fast .