2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦42:动物园

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my favourite animal is dog.he has two big bright eyes .he is so cute .he is so helpful when i do differents of things .he can help the blind and old people cross the road . he is so imaginative enough to do actions to make us laugh .he is generous and activity .i all never forget the lovely dod .