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more and more students are under the great pressure .they don,t like the in the from ogf the class and their teachers leave them lots of home work to do . so they have no time to relax and have fun on regularly even on weekends .thay lack appropriate activities and so they at loss when they alieve .they see through the educational system is too tired to them .