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mother is my favourite person that i really want to talk about it.they give me the best the conditional and teach me lots of knowledge at the same time .at the same time ,the give the seffless of the love .i could get along well with them . so i don,t worry about the others such as when do we eat for tponight . they send me to school to learn the knowledge and let me have a good rest when i finish my task .they agree me to some extent due to they are democracy .althrough they want me to be the top students in cllss but they don,t push me up to do what i dislike .the home is full of love and house .