2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦45:My Favorite Festival

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my favourite festivals are mothers ,s day . i think my parents are the person i like most . they give me the best living materials .such as food ,drink ,warm clothes and toys . they teach us knowledge and helps me lots with my studt . they teach me special thing thhat is how to be a woman.they give me love .when i was ill ,they tried to make me happy . family is like a house full of love and friendship . i hope every chld will give his love in rerurn for his parents , love