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in th modern world ,the internet has come into my life .in there we can enjoy ourselves through making friends on online .uit can teach me knowledge and help me lots with my study . they teach me a special things that we can,t learn from the books .they cam make us happy through browse the web.on the opposite , it can ruin our eyes when always see it