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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9057
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As can be seen from the picture, A teacher maybe is delivering a literture to a kid and says that "juet think of it as if you are reading a long text message." we can know that it is a big problem that why people don not reading literture at present. The main reason for the issue is that network has developed fast.Now, people can use mobilephone surfing in the internet. they can read a lot of interesting novels and chat with others. who do not know each other.on the contrary, if we just scan the literture just like a long text message,it is very boring. therefor, there are no people to reading literture. In my opiniion,first, we should teach kids to develop an interest of reading literture.the second, we should intersive reading. then, we can know some literature is amusing too.

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