2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(51):垃圾焚烧

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Some dustmen think burning the rubbish is a shortcut to process rubbish. However I strongly disapprove this method of processing. Burning rubbish causes severe pollution to our enviroment and does harm to people's health and even casues cancer to some people. Improving people' enviromental awareness, including the dustmen' will help to deal with this problem. Stop burning the rubbish and send the rubbish rubbish processing plant where the rubbish will be decomposed.