2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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As a villiage surrounded by hills,the most beautiful landscape of it is of course the hills.The hills is regarded as not only a place where people plant their crops,but also a holy paradise. The is a story which was widespread in my hown.The story is like that:In the ancient days,the government sent troops into the villiage in order to catch young men to pad the troops,but many men were still children.So they work out an idea.The local people sent the young to these hills to escaping the catching,which saved many young people escaped from the government,so in many people's eyes these hills have magic power.As a result of that,people here respect the nature leading to a good environment here.Of course,the scenery is fantastic.There are many kinds of trees,birds and some common animals,all f these makes the hills alive. The hills is a combination of human and nature.There is just like a heaven of green.