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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As is known to all, "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention". During our daily life,we can see information anywhere, like the TV ,phone, computer and other means that we can get the information. but sometimes we do not know what is the real information or which information is ridiculous. For example, in our daily life we can see everyone keep their phone anywhere,like in bus, train,subway and so on. All they do is to see what things have happened today or did their phone have any information？ When we see some irrelevant information, we should learn recognize whether they are truth.If we see something unhappy, we should calm us up and keep in mind ourselves, to release our stress. It is not matter if we see irrelevant information that distracted us. We just need to know one thing,"if we can avoid then we just meet with them."
