文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;简单句偏多了;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
My new teacher is form Italy. She is very nice. She has two big eyes,and long hair. She usually told me should hard study. She likes swimming and playing basketball. She got married when she 26 yeas old.She had a baby boy,the baby was born last year. She's husband is a Manager. She is a good teacher.I am very much love her .