可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;作者词汇量偏小,且文章中拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My house have a livingroom, a kitchen, two bathrooms, three badroom and a balcony. There is a TV in the livingroom, it 's on the wall, near the doll. There are three chiars in the room, they're near the window. My family watch TV likes sit here. I like the kitchen because I like cooking. Everyday I go home for woke, I'm cooking delicious foods for my family. There are three badroom in my upstairs, My badroom opposite sitairs, the right room is my mom and dad sleep, the lift room is my sister sleep. The bathroom one is om downsitairs, another one is on upsitairs. The balcony near my badroom