2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,shopping have a lot of ways.Online shopping already has bacome a fashion. The Online shopping could help us to save our time and body strength and provide us to more style.Therefore,people fall in love with it.But i think anything all have advantage and disadvantage.Online shopping also have bad the hand.Such as Online shopping is unsafe for our money and we don't know the quality of things.So we could will cheated.I think that we need stop people cheating us and don't tell people our importent imformation.If we have time to shopping ,we still go to shopping in clothing store.