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Thinking about what we can do to make our lives more meaningful is the most vital stuff we always meditate.Since we were born and went to school,got touch with amounts of knowledge,the pursuit of life is the only topic that is unchangeable. What I will do to make my life more meaningful is to travel.Go as many places as I can,give a look at every place I enjoy staying,which will definitely do good to me.I can braoden my horizon,tell everyone I love about how beautiful the world is.Make a number of friends,to show them how friendly I am.If I get the chance to change something about my life.I will go to other countries,to see how gentle the British are,how smart the American are and how friendly the world is.I long to grasp the foreign culture,take a look at their splendid buildings.As long as I finish all of these,I suppose my life will full of meaning. There are still tons of people wandering around the world,looking for their lives' meaning,then struggling for them.The only approach to them is to try as hard as we are capable of.Only in this way will our lives be meaningful.
