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From: Wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date : December 23 rd, 2008 To: sales-department@@hotmail.com Subject: Check the product list Dear Mr. Johnson, We have received 3000 pieces product of your company, but according to our signing of the Number 35 order. The quantity is 3500 pieces, so the others 500 pieces aren't receive. Please double check your product list again. We are looking forward to your early reply! Best and regards Wanghai Yang