2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

As is known to all,"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket."The meaning of this old saying is to avoid all the eggs break in one basket.So the implication is that we should make a diversified development. However,several of humans can acquaint it in this rapid development worldd.We can see varieties of informations about the unemployment of college students.One of the reason that causes unemployment is that they don’t have various abilities to meet the company’s need,which they have been interviewed. With the rapid development of science and technology,college students should make a change on their mind and ability.If they just keen on one skill,they would not find their space in this world.So what they can do is to change and develop themselves gradually to avoid elimination.