2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On excessive packaging Presently,a variaty of products are excisting on excessive packaging.On the one hand, the customers must be payed excessive package,so customers can a waste of money.On the other hand,productors spend a plenty of mential to it,a society of the many wealths are excessed. I consider that this excessive package is lacked of whole social wealth realize,in the information society and knowledge society.Today,whole world still has the badly productors undertaking to excessing package to theirselves prilots. I suggest that people of the all world afford to protect our society wealth,so that earth mother can be insisting untill a generation and generation,only this way we can develop our economic society,knowledge society and information society.