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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
the Merits and the Demerits of ChengDu Sichuan is noted as 'Land of Abandance'.The famous actor Zhang Yimou said that Chengdu is a city where those people who travel there don't want to leave. It is the highest eatimate for Chengdu. It is true that Chengdu is a good place for individuals to live First, Chengdu is the largest city in Sichuan and develop well.There has been many beautiful natural park and places of interest.Huanglongxi and Du Fu Thatched Cottage are two famouse human landscapes. People who invite there wll acquire much information from the two sites about the history they have never been carefull. Second, Chengdu is a modern and fashionable city.It is common that many girls wearing beautiful and fashionable clothes are seen in the street.What's more,as many famous companies and supermarkets has been run there, people can buy whatever you really want conveniently. Third,Chengdu is a plain and has a good climate which isn't too hot or too cold.which is very suitable for people to live.At the same time ,the slower speed of living is the other facter for people to settle there. However
